…However, I request you (for the last time) for
““Samsung Galaxy Tab S 705 [model: SM-T705]””. If you can’t manage to get it then I’ll accept your choice.
Thanks a lot.
Are the sentences above grammatical?
However, I request (for the last time) that you supply me with a “Samsung Galaxy Tab S 705 [model: SM-T705]”. If you can’t manage to source that model then I’ll accept an alternative of equivalent value or greater.
Thank you very much.
It’s not possible to tell from this whether ‘however’ is used correctly.
Many thanks
How to write in one sentence (using the words/hints below)?
– when I was reading a novel…
– I felt earth shake,
– about 9:17 pm, local time
– earthquake
– magnitude, 5.2 on the Richter scale.
– duration= 4 or 5 secs
– my wife, very frightened
– tremor was felt in several places of Nepal.
– in India’s Bihar cities too.
Thank you very much.
‘Request’ here is a bit old hat, archaic. I would suggest - For the last time I would ask you to find/get me a …
Dear Sir./mam.,
How to write in one sentence (using the words/hints below)? – when I was reading a novel…-- I felt earth shake,-- about 9:17 pm, local time-- earthquake-- magnitude, 5.2 on the Richter scale. – duration= 4 or 5 secs-- my wife, very frightened-- tremor was felt in several places of Nepal. – in India’s Bihar cities too.Thank you very much.
I would use ‘request’ with no qualms about being archaic!
I certainly wouldn’t use these alternative suggestions in a formal letter.
You’ve written the basics, so why not have a go at the whole thing? I would not suggest a single sentence, There are too many ideas for that.
Maybe
When I was reading a novel, I felt the earth shake at about 9:17 pm, local time due to an earthquake with a magnitude of 5.2 on the Richter scale and a duration of 4 or 5 seconds, causing my wife to become very frightened by this tremor that was felt in several places in Nepal and India’s Bihar cities too.
Personally, I would not put this all in one sentence, as it would sound better separated, but I was trying to accept your challenge.
Thank you all for your advice n suggestions.