Re-write thses statments in the correct form , Please!

Hello,
I need some help in correcting these sentences.

The following statements are written by student. They contain different types of errors(e.g. fragments, punctuation, parallelism, redundacies, ect.)
Re-write them in the correct form.

a. Swimming, jogging and a tennis game are good forms of exercises.

b. Literature is usually approached differently depending upon its genre fiction poetry or drama.

c. Tests divided into two types objective and subjective

d. In her fiction Tony Morrison explores the relationship between Patriarchy, imperialist, and capitalism.

e. studying at school is different from studying at university in different things

f. Emily Dickinson lived a solitary life, maintaining litle comunication with people and the outside word. In fact, she prefered nature and Deity over people and things of this earth, so extensive travels to which here poems refer took place only in her mind.

g. Macbeth is one of the famous tragedies written by Shakespeare. It talks about a great warrior who become a murder after he met three witches

h. First of all, this course improved our thinking, for example when the teacher gives us general idea, first we ask ourselves many questions then we think deeply how to narrow it and how to write relevant information which related to our topics, also how to support the topics.

i. Although Advanced Writing considered one of the courses that has a lot of advantages, it has many disadvantages

Do you want to have a go at correcting them first? Then someone can check your answers.

I have already answered them, but i needed a professional answers. my point it’s not a problem of punctuating. I am talking about the structure, some sentences seems okay or maybe foggy.

some sentences need eliminating the sentence fragment, some needs editing the beginning and the length, some are incorrect transition or expletive sentences.

I am seeking for a perfect answer in order to open my mind for such a good understanding and evaluating both weaknesses and strengths points

I have an Advanced Writing Final Exam by Tomorrow.

I seek for a reference for my questions.

So what are your answers?

I hope you:
remember to capitalise every sentence,
remember every full stop
and write the pronoun ‘I’ as a capital letter throughout the exam.

(All basic rules and all errors you made in your previous post.)

a. Swimming, jogging, and a tennis game are good forms of exercises. I feel something is wrong in “a tennis”

b. Literature is usually approached differently, depending upon its genre, fiction, poetry or drama. “added commas here”

c.Tests are divided into two types: objective and subjective.

d. In her fiction, Tony Morrison explores the relationship between Patriarchy, Imperialist, and Capitalism.

e. studying at school is different from studying at university in different things

“Studying at school is different from studying at university.” and my answer seems wrong??

f. Emily Dickinson lived a solitary life, maintaining a little communication with people and the outside world. In fact, she preferred nature and Deity over people and things of this earth, so extensive travels, to which here poems refer took place only in her mind.

g. Macbeth is one of the famous tragedies written by Shakespeare. It talks about a great warrior who become a murder after he met three witches. in the book written “takes” sorry if i missed in this above.

h. First of all, this course improved our thinking; for example, when the teacher gives us general idea, first we ask ourselves many questions, then we think deeply how to narrow it, and how to write relevant information which related to our topics, also how to support the topics.

i. Although Advanced Writing considered one of the courses that has a lot of advantages, it has also many disadvantages. " also it has many disadvantages."

I’d take some of those corrections further. (Different correct variations are possible in some cases.)

a) Swimming, jogging and tennis are…

b)… depending on its genre: fiction, poetry or drama.

d)… between Patriarchy, Imperialism and Capitalism.

e) Studying at school is different to/from studying at University. (no further extension)

f) I think unnecessary corrections have been made in this one.
Emily Dickinson lived a solitary life, maintaining litle communication with people and the outside world. In fact, she preferred nature and Deity over people and things of this earth, so the extensive travels to which her poems refer took place only in her mind.

g) … a great warrior who become a murderer after he met three witches.

h) First of all, this course improved our thinking. For example, when the teacher gives us a general idea, first we ask ourselves many questions then we think deeply about how to narrow it down and how to write the relevant information relating to our topics. We also consider how to support the topics.

i) i. Although Advanced Writing is considered to be one of the courses that has a lot of advantages, it also has many disadvantages.

Exactly thank you my dear.