Attention: Language coaches. Please help me make the application below grammatical and more formal.
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Sub: Change in beneficiary.
Sir,
I request you to change the name of beneficiary which I had stated as ABC (Brother) while opening an account in this bank. I want the beneficiary to be as Miss XYZ (wife). I will appreciate it very much if you consider my request/ application immediately. Thanks.
Faithfully yours
Noren
A/c Name: Limbu, N
A/c #: 123456789
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Thank you very much for your help.
Noren