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As there is a traditional saying ‘Old is gold’ is effectively true when it comes to preserving our friend circle. Although, no one can deny the fact that this matter has both positive and negative sides but I do firmly stand by the opinion of cherishing old friends is more significant than building new friendships. I feel this way for particular reasons which I will explore further in this essay.
To begin with, if we compare old friendship to a thousand-year-old tree we can perceive one thing which is a stronger root system. In simple terms, an old tree includes a deeper root system which is an important reason why the tree is so much stronger. The same concept can be applied in the case of old friendships, the stronger the bond internally deeper the friendship grows. I can personally relate to this situation by giving my own experience. I have one childhood friend which is very close to me, and we have been friends for an ample amount of time. We have been together for about 17 years. Although not just measuring time strengthens friendship the bond which has been formed equally matures the friendship more.
Additionally, being friends with people also has some other benefits. Being together for so many years develops a sense of comfort where a person knows the weakness and needs of the other person. If the person is at a vulnerable point in his or her life, surely the older friend knows how to handle the situation gracefully by knowing the person’s capabilities and will be able to guide the person accordingly. For instance, a person failed in chemistry subject which was the hardest subject for him to study. His older friend was studying the subject but he scored well. As the older friend knew he started different techniques which helped the person to score well and eventually he did score well. The older friend knew how he could handle the situation effectively. If there was a new friend instead, he wouldn’t be able to handle this situation as effectively as the older friend did.
In the end, I certainly stand in the opinion that cherishing old friends is a good way to make the bond stronger and help each other in every possible way.