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Topic: Some students prefer to study alone. Others prefer to study with a group of students. Which do you prefer?
Some students prefer to study alone while others prefer to study with a group of students. The question is which I prefer to study (alone or with a group). From my point of view, I prefer to study alone for the following reasons.
First of all, most of knowledge we gain is by reading. Reading alone is more effective than reading with a group. By studying alone, I have a quite environment, and I can concentrate more on reading. I really like reading books alone in my room because I can concentrate on reading effectively four pages per one minute. However, when I study with my friends in the library, I find it difficult in reading, but easy for chat and discussion.
What is more, study alone makes me think more. When I have difficult problems, I have to think more to find solutions for these problems because I do not have any support from others at that moment. Thinking is really good way of exercising my brain. It helps me feel confident and active in any situation. For example, in writing Toefl’s essay, the first and very important step is brainstorming. That means we have to think a lot to generate ideas. If we master this step, we will be very confident in the writing section of the Toefl exam.
Last but not least, study alone makes me have own opinions. By studying alone, I think independently, and my thoughts is not referenced from any one. It is very good for writing a research paper because it need new ideas and differences from others that were published. That is also very important for creative studies such as art, literature, engineering, etc.
From aforementioned reasons, I prefer to study alone because it makes me read fast, think more and think independently to have own opinions.
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Hear is another essay from me. Please correct and evaluate it. Thanks so much for your help.
Topic: Some students prefer to study alone. Others prefer to study with a group of students. Which do you prefer?
Some students prefer to study alone while others prefer to study with a group of students. The question is HOW I prefer to study (alone or with a group). From my point of view, I prefer to study alone for the following reasons.
First of all, most of knowledge we gain is by reading. Reading alone is more effective than reading with a group. By studying alone, I have a quite environment, and I can concentrate more on reading. I really like reading books alone in my room because I can concentrate on reading effectively four pages per one minute. However, when I study with my friends in the library, I find it difficult TO CONCENTRATE ON MY READING, but easy for chat and discussion.
What is more, studyING alone makes me think more. When I have difficult problems, I have to think more to find solutions for these problems, because I do not have any support from others at that moment. Thinking is A really good way of exercising my brain. It helps me feel confident and active in any situation. For example, in writing Toefl’s essay, the first and very important step is brainstorming. That means we have to think a lot to generate ideas. If we master this step, we will be very confident in the writing section of the Toefl exam.
Last but not least, studyING alone makes me have own opinions. By studying alone, I think independently, and my thoughts ARE not referenced from anyone. It is very good for writing a research paper because it need new ideas and differS from others that were PREVIOUSLY published. That is also very important for creative studies such as art, literature, engineering, etc.
From aforementioned reasons, I prefer to study alone because it ALLOWS me TO read fast, think more and ARRIVE independently to MY own opinions.
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A good essay Hieutele. Four pages a minute eh! That’s some going.
Kitos. 8.5/10
Thanks so much for your correction. I really appreciate it.
Four pages a minute is my desire. I am trying to practice.
8.5/10 is amazing and is over my thoughts. Thanks
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