Topic: People attend college or university for many different reasons. Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People study in college or university for many different reasons. I think the most important reason is to gain more knowledge and learn more skills. There are also many other reasons that people study in college such as to get more friends, and increase one’s self-confidence. These days, most jobs require people who are educated and have good job skills. Therefore, people who want a good job have to study hard and at least graduate with a high education.
Some people who study in college or university want to make more friends and increase their communication skills. They enjoy their lives in university or college and tend to socialize a lot. They can meet more people who have the similar interests. They can go play football after school and make more friends with who they trust.
People graduating from college seem more confident in our community. These people are more respected by society. Many people want to be respected and to be important by family, friends, their bosses, etc. They find that most of them can confidently talk and do their jobs as they are more educated. Therefore, most people want to get the confidence through the university or college study.
In today’s society, people need more knowledge and skills to be adapted. The university and college study is a good way to achieve this.
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Hi, this seems very different from the essay you submitted last week on this same topic. Was this one written by someone else, or did you write this one in a much shorter time than your previous one? Just wondering.
