Please review my essay for IELTS writing task1

Topic:
The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

My answer:
The illustrations depict the comparison of reconstruction to the southwest airport planned in next year. Overall, this renewal will enlarge its building space with more terminals and facilities available for customers.

The terminal area, which currently has eight gates with a short walkway, will be expanded to two divided roads in the shape of ‘Y’. There will be ten more gates available in total, and customers can use a sky train inside the building to access near a gate they need to go. New shops will be placed between the first gate and the security area as well.

More change can be seen in southern area of the building. For departures area, the existing cafe and the check-in counter will move their area and a bag drop area will be added. For arrivals area where there was no facility at the moment will also have a new cafe and ATM. This area will be expanded slightly to have a corner space for car rental.

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The illustrations show the comparison of the renovation with the Southwest Airport planned for next year. Overall, this renovation will increase building space and provide more terminals and facilities for customers.

The terminal area, which currently has eight gates with a short walkway, will be expanded to two divided streets in the shape of a Y. A total of ten more gates will be available, and customers will be able to use a skytrain inside the building to get close to a gate they need. New stores will also be located between the first gate and the security area.

Other changes can be seen in the southern area of the building. In the departures area, the existing café and check-in counter will be moved to another area, and a baggage claim area will be added. The arrivals area, which previously had no facility, will also have a new café and ATM. This area will be slightly expanded to include a corner for car rental.

Thank you very much. This is very helpful.

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