I like my boss…
Why?
My boss is a balanced person with quality characteristics.
He is honest, fair, and has a sense of humor.
He has a lot of motivation for a lifetime and many objectives for the future. He communicates this philosophy to his employees.
He is successful in business and has always good ideas.
His decisions are quick and right.
My boss is very good at communication.
He ist an excellent listener and communication partner.
He gives clear instructions but he is not heartless and also listen to his employees ideas.
The work starts at 9 am and ends on time.
After the lunch break we do some sports.
Where can I find this boss?
OK, Torsten tells me that yours is supposed to be an ‘article’, Katjakb.
To write an article, you need to do much more than jot down some random thoughts about your boss.
I like my boss… —This sentence ends in an ellipsis: it is unfinished.
Why? — An article is not a conversation.
My boss is a balanced person with quality characteristics. — The underlined carries no meaning.
He is honest, fair, and has a sense of humor.
He has a lot of motivation for a lifetime and many objectives for the future. He communicates this philosophy to his employees. — The meaning of the underlined is unclear.
He is successful in business and has always good ideas.
His decisions are quick and right.
My boss is very good at communication.
He is an excellent listener and communication partner.
He gives clear instructions but he is not heartless and also listens to his employees ideas. — The underlined is the wrong word choice.
The work starts at 9 am and ends on time. — And what time is that? And why is this important?
After the lunch break we do some sports. — American football? Pole-vaulting?
Where can I find this boss??? — No, this is a silly ending. You need to think about your article as a whole: it needs to clearly introduce its topic, present your opinions (with support) on the topic, and finish with a concluding summary.