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Topic: Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?
It is true that visiting museums and historical relics are vital activities for improving human knowledge about the world around us. However, these places seem to be more attractive to overseas visitors than the local inhabitants. There could be several reasons for this and measures need to be taken to encourage more nearby people to visit this type of attractions.
There are various explanations of the local resident’s low attendance rate at historical locations, despite the considerable number of visits from tourists. Firstly, local attractions seem to be extremely familiar to people nearby. The fact that historical places, which are usually carefully preserved, hardly change as the time passes makes the locals lose their interest in visiting them. On the contrary, overseas travellers are likely to be always curious about the cultural and historical attractions in a foreign country. Another reason for this case is the nominal fees such as tickets for admission or parking fee, which often discourage the local citizens, while foreign visitors find it quite comfortable to pay these fees since they are in a holiday trip.
In my view, there are some steps that these attraction’s management committee and government could take to tackle this problem. The main solution is for the museum and historical relics execute more public-oriented events in order to gain the locals’ attention. It seems logical that people prefer taking part in these activities than seeing repeatedly some ancient collections. Moreover, government should provide more financial support to the historical sites to encourage its residents to visit these locations. For example, thanks to the abundant source of money, some museums can offer free admission for the locals, which, I believe, can significantly increase the number of visits made by the local inhabitants.
In conclusion, historical locations are far more appealing to foreigners than the locals for many reasons, such as the lack of the necessary renovation as well as the money charged to access to these attractions. However, various measures can be implemented to solve this problems by financial assistance from governments and the effort of these places to attract the local residents.