Hi Luschen, Please spend your time checking my report. Thank you very much!
The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.
A glance at the graph provided reveals the proportions of six consumer products in four European nations, namely Germany, Italy, France and Britain.
It is evident that the consumptions of these goods in Britain are the highest, especially toys and photographic film, amongst the other surveyed countries.
The most interesting thing to notice is that Britain sees the highest figures of consumptions of all the six products, compared to those in the other countries. Specifically, toys and photographic film sales occupy for somewhere in the vicinity of 170, while the remaining types of goods are recorded with the lowest figures, just standing around 160 for perfumes and CD, and just over 150 for personal stereos and tennis racquets.
By comparison, the figures in Germany are the lowest, except for the sales of perfumes and tennis racquets (a negligible 2 or 3% higher than those of France), being at just under 150. The finally point is that France only experiences the high consumption of photographic films, at approximately 165, whereas the remaining goods are at about 160 or lower.
Hi Muhammad, I thought you did a pretty good job on this one, as the graph was not that easy to write about - I didn’t really notice too many definite trends in the data. You seemed to summarize it pretty well, although you did have some errors in usage, prepositions, and a sentence that was a bit unclear to me. Overall, I would rate this a band 6.
