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The tables present the statistics taken from a survey about urban citizens’ thoughts about various aspects of life in 1980 and 2010. Overall, people had better thoughts in most categories, exception of education and environment.
According to the tables, the number of people thought the transport system and accommodation were good in 1980 were just over 50 people but it then rose up to over 60 people in 2010, as a result less people could consider they were good or bad but the number of people think accommodation increased slightly from 10 to 18 citizens. Citizens’ opinions about healthcare and shops were more positive in the two years as there were over 80 people thought they were good while the number of people think they were normal had also decreased from 11 to 9 people for shops and from 24 to 10 for healthcare. The number of people think they were bad also went down too but because the statistics in these categories were not high from the beginning so there were not many changes.
Education in 1980 were good yet it had negative opinions in 2010 as there were 76 residents thought it was good, a difference of 6 people when compared with its statistics in 1980. In addition people thought it normal lesser and gained more negative thought about it more. The environment was the worst as the number of people thought it was bad increased from 8 to 20 citizens while number of citizens thought it was good in 1990 and 2010 were 72 and 64 people, respectively.

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The tables present statistics from a survey of urban citizens’ thoughts on various aspects of life in 1980 and 2010. Overall, people had better thoughts in most categories, with the exception of education and the environment.
According to the tables, the number of people who thought the transport system and housing were good in 1980 was just over 50 people, but then rose to over 60 people in 2010, so that fewer people could think they were good or bad, but the number of people who thought housing was good rose slightly from 10 to 18 citizens. Citizens’ opinions of health care and shops were more positive over the two years, with more than 80 people saying they were good, while the number of people who thought they were normal also fell from 11 to 9 people for shops and from 24 to 10 people for health care. The number of people who thought they were bad also fell, but because the statistics in these categories were not high to begin with, there was not much change.
Education was good in 1980 but had negative opinions in 2010 as there were 76 residents who thought it was good, a difference of 6 people when compared to its statistics in 1980. In addition, people thought it was normal less and gained more negative thoughts about it more. The environment was the worst as the number of people who thought it was bad increased from 8 to 20 citizens while the number of citizens who thought it was good in 1990 and 2010 were 72 and 64 people respectively.

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