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The diagram present the change between the present appear of the airport and it’s after development.
Overall, the airport will mostly be expanded in the connection to planes and there will be some more facilities added in both departures and arrivals area to serve customers.
On the right side of the airport, which is the arrivals area, the passport control customs room right now only has one door and this will be doubled in next year. In addition there is no other service in this room but in the development plan, it shows that there will be a cage, atm and a car hire in the right side of the room. Continue to the path that lead to the planes, right now, there are 4 gates and in next year there will be 9 gates in total with a sky train to transport passengers.
On the left side of the airport – the departures area, the place that passengers go to their plane has a walkway at the moment but in next year this will be replaced by the sky train and the number of gates in this area will become 9 instead of 4 at the moment, passengers will also be able to buy things in the new shops in this area next year . The departures room, just like the arrivals room will have its door doubled in number in next year. It’s coffee in the top right corner of the room will be moved to the left down corner, the check-in will be changed to the opposite side and in its present place, there will be a bag drop area there

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The diagram shows the change between the present appearance of the airport and it’s after development.
Overall, the airport will be expanded mainly in the connection to the planes and there will be some more facilities added in both the departure and arrival area to serve the customers.
On the right side of the airport, which is the arrivals area, the passport control customs room currently has only one door and this will be doubled in the next year. In addition, there are no other services in this room, but in the development plan, it shows that there will be a cage, ATM and car rental in the right side of the room. Continue along the path leading to the airplanes, right now there are 4 gates and next year there will be a total of 9 gates with a sky train to transport passengers.
On the left side of the airport - the departures area, the place where the passengers go to their plane, at the moment there is a walkway, but in the next year this will be replaced by the sky train and the number of gates in this area will become 9 instead of 4 at the moment, passengers will also be able to buy things in the new shops in this area next year. The departures area, just like the arrivals area, will have double the number of gates next year. It’s Coffee in the upper right corner of the room will be moved to the lower left corner, check-in will be moved to the opposite side and in its current location, there will be a bag drop area.