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The shares of films made by 5 different nations are showed by the bar chart. Overall, most countries increased making movies, except in nation A and nation C.
In 2007, nation A created the largest number of films in the chart, at approximately 80% but in next two years, its statistics fell down slightly and reached about 75% in 2009. Country C’s quantity was much lower than nation A and just modestly stayed at about 20% in 2007, its quantity rose up to above 20% line but then fell down to below its start peak.
The percentage of films creat by nation B was quite low when compared to country A’s proportion as it stayed around 32% peak; however, its place in the chart in 2007 was the second place, just behind country A. From 2007 to 2008, its proportion increased slightly but in 2008 to 2009 period, it rose up dramatically to nearly 50% . Both countries D and E had a very modest statistic and their percentage both slightly rose up throught out the period.