Here’s my first paragraph of composition.
Please correct me if there are any grammatic errors or if sentences sound weird.
Thanks!
‘KEEP YOUR MOUTH SHUT!’ Joyce shouted angrily near to the edge of my ear. I was embarrassed and hurt.
The class were staring at us curiously as if we were performing something and they were the audience.
I was standing still as where i was just now. I could not
imagine this was such a disgraced i had ever recieved. Joyce gazed furiously once my eyes met hers.
I could not speak and was speechless. I felt stupid. And joyce went overboard as she saw how afraid i was.
‘WHY ARENT YOU SPEAK UP?’’ ‘’ YOU GOT NO RIGHT TO CONTROL MY LIFE’’
‘’ WE END OUR SOCALLED FRIENDSHIP YOU NAMED NOW’'i scrutinzed her face, feeling in pain. I could not believe she had changed to
someone whom i had never known before.