Please evaluate my attempt at American accent

English as a Second Language Listening, speaking, pronunciation and accent
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Here’s my attempt at the American accent. I hope it’s no too short The text I’m reading in the recording is:

Well, here’s a story for you: Sarah Perry was a veterinary nurse who had been working daily at an old zoo in a deserted district of the territory, so she was very happy to start a new job at a superb private practice in North Square near the Duke Street Tower. That area was much nearer for her and more to her liking.

Thank you in advance.

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Way to go!
Slightly of a american accents.

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Hello Weaself,

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Thank you very much for all the answers. Now that I’m at home, I can record a longer part of the story so that it will be easier for you to asses it. Thank you in advance for any help.

Regards