Please evaluate my attempt at American accent

Here’s my attempt at the American accent. I hope it’s no too short The text I’m reading in the recording is:

Well, here’s a story for you: Sarah Perry was a veterinary nurse who had been working daily at an old zoo in a deserted district of the territory, so she was very happy to start a new job at a superb private practice in North Square near the Duke Street Tower. That area was much nearer for her and more to her liking.

Thank you in advance.

Way to go!
Slightly of a american accents.

Hello Weaself,

Thank you very much for all the answers. Now that I’m at home, I can record a longer part of the story so that it will be easier for you to asses it. Thank you in advance for any help.