Topic: You have decided to give several hours of your time each month to improve the community where you live.What is one thing you will do to improve your community?Why?Use specific reasons and details to expaline your choice.
I have found many people provinding services according to their convienancy and their job schadule , I have decided to give two hours every week. As being a dentist, I decided a way in which I will aware the poeple who are addicted to smoking. As smoking is dangerous not only for oral cavity but affects to all physiological system of body, by making concious about the harmful effects of smoking, they can improve their quality of life and can live remaining life healthy.
First, If they will accept to my advise then they can leave their remaining life healthier than earlier when they were addicated to smoking . It is because we and thoes people who do smoking know that smoking is really harmfull for their bodu.Though They are not able to give up them. By doing smoking they are not destroying life of their owen but their family members too because they might be dependant on them. So I will make some seminars, paper projects and certain vidieos to make them educate about the consequvancies of smoking. If they are able to give up somokig, then are upgrading their living systems of body and allow them to work physiologically.
Moreover, I will counsil them untill they will not totally come up with them. As stop smoking abberantly is also quite hard for them. They might have a thought of continuing the smoking but I will give them periodically follow up. I will explain them like that besides disturbing your physiological condition of a body, how much money they were wasting for smoking when they had habit of smoking and now as they have walked in a good way then how much money they are able to save and could help in their children expensive education. So I can help them to improve the quality of life.
As, I can find this way according to my capasity and education, I can us my knowledge to educate the smokers and counsile them to aviod such bed habit as I strongly believe that smoking, a silent killer should not be able to kill my community members as because they are unaware and uneducated.
Hi, I thought this essay was much better. You do have quite a few misspelled words though, which is quite distracting. When you are using examples, your writing seems better.