Some people argue for a broad university education in which students learn about different subjects. Others argue for a specialized university education in which students learn only about specific field of study. Which position do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Education is very important factor in our life. Some people prefer to study in a broad university which students learn about different subjects and some people prefer to study a specialized university which students learn only about a specific field. As far as I am concerned, it is beneficial to study in a specialized university.
First of all, I prefer to study specialized university because it is good to give all your power to one field and to be professional in it. Rather that divide your brain for different subjects. It is very hard to study different subject and to handle all of them together.
Second, as for me it is much better to learn one field perfectly and to be successful on it, that to know many different fields incompletely. For example, if we compare two person who knows only one field perfectly and the other knows many fields imperfectly, the first one will be more advanced than the second one.
There are advantages to study a broad university. For example, to have information in many fields and around different people when they speak different fields it is good to show that you have also ideas and you are aware in this field.
In conclusion, to be professional in your field is very important. Because to become specialist in your field and to know every sides of it will make you successful in the future.
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