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Sometimes I lie and think of all the exciting things I,ve done,as soon as I think of an exciting event,one event pops into my head and that day is the day I spent in the desert,
We,d been planning to go on a trip to the desert with some friends for a long time,finally we had come to a decision.We were going to do it.
On the day i woke up feeling as excited as when a footballer scores a goal in the final.
It was a nice sunny morning, the birds were singing, everything seemed peaceful.

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