I am practicing the English grammar . And I start with past simple tense.
I have chosen the holiday topic to write a paragraph.
So I hope you can help me to correct the sentence, grammar, and what ever you noticed.
My last holiday was amazing. I went to Orlando where is located in United State of America. I visited the Magic kingdom and the Epcot areas. In the Magic kingdom there were a lot of show. I watched the castle of Cinderella and many cartoon characters like Mickey Mouse, Minnie Mouse and so on. In the Epcot park I watched a different cultures. I tested a different food and I like them. I saw many show that presented a culture of many countries. It was a good experience to go there. The trip confirmed me that we have a big world with amazing fiction.
Hi Maha, here are my suggestions:
Thank you for your correction.
I mean fantasy. because the magic kingdom shows fantasy characters.
Maybe “… big world full of imagination and fantasy.”
I’d suggest that you use ONLY the past tense form of verbs. So I’d further modify it a little agreeing to the corrections made by Luschen.
My last holiday was amazing. I went to Orlando in the United States of America. I visited the Magic Kingdom and the Epcot areas. In the Magic Kingdom there were a lot of shows. I saw the Cinderella’s castle and many cartoon characters like Mickey Mouse, Minnie Mouse and so on. In the Epcot park I also saw different cultures. I tasted different foods and I liked them. I saw many shows that presented the cultures of many countries. It was a good experience. The trip confirmed to me the existence of a big world with amazing things.
Thank you for your comment