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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents or other adult relatives should make important decisions for their older (15 to 18year-old) teenage children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

I disagree with the statement that parents of other adult relatives should make important decisions for their older 15-18yr old teenage children.
Firstly it deprives teenagers of becoming independent individuals in future. Teenagers whose parents make most of their decision seem to struggle in future and are unable to stand on their own feet. Life brings lot of different situations. If a teenager gets himself into trouble then he or she should learn to get out of it too.
Secondly some decisions are so crucial that if parents make it, they can eventually jeopardize their child’s future. For example, Decision of career. High school students should be given chance to make their own future depending on their interests in life. If for example parents want their child to be a doctor and the child is least interested in it and wants to be a musician and is constantly under pressure to fulfill dreams of his or her parents then he or she may be not be a perfect doctor and enjoy being one, which can end up with a lousy check up of a patient and might drastically result in patient leaving this earth!
Thirdly those teenagers whose parents make most of their decisions seem to face challenge of lack of confidence to face different situations. They are not confident to enough to decide between wrong and right and are fearful if things might go wrong. In short they can’t decide what is right or wrong and which path to take in order to get out of sticky situation.
So I think teenagers between age of 15 to 18 should be given chance to make their own decisions and stand on their own feet along with occasional guidance of their parents of course.

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I disagree with the statement that parents of other adult relatives should make important decisions for their older 15-18yr old teenage children.
Firstly it deprives teenagers of becoming independent individuals in future. Teenagers whose parents make most of their decisionS seem to struggle in future and are unable to stand on their own feet. Life brings lot of different situations. If a teenager gets himself into trouble then he or she should learn to get out of it too.

Secondly some decisions are so crucial that if parents make THEM, they can eventually jeopardize their child’s future. For example, the decision of A career. High school students should be given THE chance to make their own DECISIONS REGARDING THEIR future depending on their interests in life.

/// If for example parents want their child to be a doctor and the child is NOT IN THE least interested in it AS A CAREER(,) and wants to be a musician(,) and is constantly under pressure to fulfill dreams of his or her parents(,) then he or she may be not be a perfect doctor NOR enjoy being one, which can end up with a lousy check up of a patient(,) and might drastically result in patient leaving this earth! ///
This sentence is far too long.

Thirdly those teenagers whose parents THE make most of their decisions seem to face THE challenge of lack of confidence IN FACING different situations. They are not confident enough to decide between wrong and right and are fearful if things might go wrong. In short they canNOT decide what is right or wrong and which path to take in order to get out of A sticky situation.

I think teenagers between THE AGES OF 15 to 18 should be given THE chance to make their own decisions and stand on their own feet along with occasional guidance of their parents of course.
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A well constructed essay Katty, except for that too lengthy sentence in the middle.

Kitos. 7.5/10