Our lives are easier than our grandparents


I’m Phuong, Quang’s sister, would you mind helping me correct the mistakes in my speaking? Thank you very much.

Topic: Is our lives easier than our grandparents? Discuss with examples.

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Hi, your answer was clear and addressed the prompt correctly. I think your first reason was pretty vague though - “we don’t have to do much with our lives”. So there really wasn’t much strong content in your answer. Here are some more specific observations:

It is better to use a shorter introduction - try “I agree that our lives are easier than those of our parents” The introduction will not really contribute much to your score - they are mainly looking for your reasons. So it is best to make it as short as possible so you can spend more time on your reasons.
“has been a huge debate” - it sounds like you are saying “hit” instead of “huge”
“our life are more easier than our parents” - "our lives are easier than our parents’ " {“more easier” is always incorrect}
You have a lot of trouble pronouncing “with” - it sounds like “wi” I think the “th” sound is very difficult for Vietnamese speakers, right? So you probably already know you need to work a little more on it.
“We don’t have to go to the field and do the farming” - “the” is really not needed here since you have not mentioned a field or farming previously in your answer
“We can play everything” - this sounds pretty vague.
“That’s all of my opinion” - this ending is pretty weak. Instead, I would go with “and that’s why I feel this way” - it is quick and easy and will apply to almost every topic