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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One should never judge a person by external appearances. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
These days, external appearances started to play a big role in person’s life. Sometimes people often refuse to make a friendship or even just to talk with poor looking and not so perfect face shape person. Saying in other words, they judge a person by his or her external appearances. In my opinion, it is not right to judge person by this way. My reasons and examples listed below will strengthen my point of view.
To begin with appearance can be deceptive. Person can wear a fashion, expensive cloth, can have a beautiful nose, lips, face, smile, but in real there is nothing good and sincere inside, in soul. Such people cares only about themselves, about their clothes, face and figure. For example, I know one girl. She has a beautiful face and clothes. She is popular in school and almost every one wants to be here friend or faster they just afraid here, because she is cool and has a lot of money. Do you think she really has good and devoted friends and can be a good, polite, honest?
Furthermore, I thing we can’t judge someone not knowing her/his character. We can judge people by their behavior not appearance. Beside, everybody can’t wear stylish clothing and be nice looking. In this way there won’t be any diversity in life and no pursuit of excellence and all people will be similar to each other.
Finally, there is a famous saying in my country " Meet on clothes, accompanied by mind". Everyone should remember this expression. Because, agree that it is easier to change a bed close style or hair style of clever and honest person than change a well-looking person to be clever.
Summarizing facts illustrated above people should thing not only about person’s external appearances but her/his inner world, behavior and soul.
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