My third post: TOEFL integrated essay

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I also wrote a new essay today. If you have time, can you please check it out and rate it?

Here’s the link:

TOEFL writing practice: Should you make decisions alone?

Hi I would really be grateful if someone could rate this essay. Q: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. There are myriad opinions regarding the issue of whether a person should make a crucial decision on his own. While some espouse the belief that a man must make important decisions alone, others adamantly oppose and criticise this idea, vehemently supporting th…