My first voice message

Hello everybody,
This is my first voice recording here on the forum.
The online voice recorder is an exiting tool ant I hope to hear from you soon.
Bye

Let me try to.
This is my first voice recording here on the forum.
The online voice recorder is an exciting tool and I hope to hear from you soon.
Bye

I am very happy after hearing your voice message,I say ,World is small village where we can live together,so I would be happy to share my experiances with you.
Please correct me.

hollo
this is my first time to share in lerning english webe site
my english it is very week beacuse thate i hope improve it throw this bage