Essay: Do you agree that Childhood is the happiest time of a person’s life?
Response:
I do believe that childhood is the happiest time of a person’s life. Many reasons support my point of view.
On one hand, when I was a child I could play as much as I liked, no limited time.My parents bought to me many games such as puzzles, electrical car I watch TV all the day, I saw many cartoons programs.They taked me to visit many natural places in a famous region in Tunisia called Bizerte such as mountains, I even memorize the name of the mountain we visited often “Ichkel mountain”, beautiful beaches, places witha lot of rocks.They represent really wonderful sights which are burned in my mind for ever.
On the other hand, I have no responsabilty when I was a child.Almost everything is raedy for me, I didn’t have to prepare anything.Furthermore everything what I needed, my parents realized it instantly for me. For example they bought to me a very chic outfit to play football for the first time in my school.I even remeber the brand whiwh is Fantasia.
More over they take care of me, they were always whith me, they also teached in order to have good marks in any subject and to enlarge my sphere of knowledge. Besides they encourage me by using a system of compensation that means when I get a full mark at any subject at any time I had the right to have choclate “Kinder surprise”.
In addition when I was child I traveled with my parents many times by train, and this mean of transport I like it until now because I have loved so much its noise and the wonderful sights it can provide over the window.In fact many memorable natural places and extraordinory historical places.
As a consequence It appears for me now that the childhood is the happiest time of a person’s life.
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