Talk about Your favorite country
For me, the most interesting country to visit is china. It is situated in Asia. The first populated country in the word. I have seen on the T.V that there are beautiful festivals. People dress up like a dragon and dance.
The way people eat with chopsticks attract me a lot. I like to give it a shot once.
The Great Wall of China is one of the greatest wonders of the word. It is even visible from the moon. They made it to protect against Mongol’s attack. 2 other well-known things in china are the Forbidden City; every year lots of tourists from around the word visit this large place.
Whenever I think about the china’s naturalize animals at first I remember pandas. The beautiful and funny bears live in china. They are very clever and smart. It’s nice to spend sometimes to watch them. I bet it’s a memorable experience for everyone.
Another reason I have chosen china to visit is there are many nations (or folks?) live together. Every nation has its own tradition and culture. As you know Asian people are traditional.
I found China interesting too! I have a feeling that you know China very well. How many places have you visited? People from different places speak different Chinese, right?
Good job!
Glad to know you are interested in China. Want to try chopsticks? Just find two sticks, and see if you can pick something up with them. It could be fun!
Mind you, the Great Wall is not visible from the moon, except that you have an incredibly powerful telescope. After all, it’s only meters wide. Only an object of reasonable contrast to its surroundings 70 miles or more in diameter would be visible to the unaided eye from the moon, whose average distance from Earth is 384,393 km (238,857 miles).
to Haihao:
That’s right, especially in south China, where dialects abound, but Mandarin prevails in urban areas and among young people, as the government has been pushing hard.
Hi Darker,
It’s good to see your message and picture! 
Is that “HAIBAO”? I am kidding. Actually I want to see EXPO Shanghai but still have no time. 
By the way, do you speak both Mandarin and Shanghai Hua? When I was in Shanghai long ago, people only spoke Shanghai Hua. I like it in Shanghai very much.
Hi many thanks Haihao and darker.
did you find any Grammer mistakes in my writting??
Did you find any grammar mistakes in my writing?
For me, the most interesting country to visit is China. It is situated in Asia, the first populated country in the world. I have seen on the T.V that there are beautiful festivals. People dress up like a dragon and dance.
The way people eat with chopsticks attract interests me a lot. I’d like to give it a shot once sometime.
The Great Wall of China is one of the greatest wonders of the world. It is even visible from the moon. They made it to protect against the Mongols’ attacks. 2One (in prose, always write numbers up to ten in words… also you only mention one other thing here.) other well-known thing in China is the Forbidden City; every year lots of tourists from around the world visit this large place.
Whenever I think about the China’s naturalize animals, at first I remember pandas. The beautiful and funny bears live in China. They are very clever and smart. It’s nice to spend some times to watch them. I bet it’s a memorable experience for everyone.
Another reason I have chosen China to visit is there are many nations (or folks?) live together. Every nation has its own tradition and culture. As you know Asian people are traditional.
That’s pretty fluent and reasonably accurate. You should be pleased with a start like that.
world - our planet.
word - a unit of written or spoken language.
Hi dear beeeneees
I am more grateful than that I can say.
I hope Porandokht wont mind, my motivation right now is really terrible. So I decided to use the same topic.
Talk about Your favorite country
My favorite country. It’s really hard to choose,but let me say England.
England is the most attractive country for me, there are plenty of reasons, first is because everyone speak English,and in environment of native English speakers It will take me no-time to learn English. But one of the main things I like about England is culture,aarchitecture,wheather and people.
Every building is story for itself, I can watch those building and lost myself in time and space, somehow buildings and architecture in England revive my deepest memories. The history of England is more than fascinating,expecially medieval ages. One of the most interesting story is about a robber named Robin Longstride( or Robin Hood ) who’s has been expatriate by King, no one for sureness can say why Robin was expatriate , but history says because King can’t sustain Robin’s glory after wining battle with French. The rest of the story everone know, after Robin was expatriate by King he started to steal from rich people and give stolen goods to poor people,Robin did this because King was cruel, and had some weird laws of how tax should work,pay or die.
The next good thing about England is weather, the most of time is rainy, I don’t know is that just a habit, or process proven by scientists,but when is rainy my imagination doesn’t have an end. I can write about everything, I can imagine everything, think about everything, my innermost fears,ideas( can’t find proper word/sentence for this,it’s possible a phrase) rise up?.
The England is well-known by minimum natural disasters compared to other countries, I don’t complain about natural disasters in my country,but it’s just fact more why I love England.
Literature, uh breathtaking, one of my favorite writers are Shakespeare and Oscar Wilde , and they are both from England.I should not forget to mention movie Lord of the rings, the best movie of that genre. It was first for ages on my top movies list. But the book is even better than movie, and writer is J.R.R Tolkien from England.
England also have very good scientiest,like: Issac Newton,Alexander Fleming, and Charles Darwin, Charles for surely changes views of the world, his discovery was, and still are amazing.
The best musicians are from England, they created new way in music, and put standars that no one can’t destroy,they are simple unreachable.
The best selling album of all time belongs to Beatles,they album is sold in so much copies ,and that is just proof how great musicians they are,but Queens are also important to mention.
The more I write about England the more I falling into depression. I honestly hope that soon that day will come,when my dreams come true.
Hi DarkEdition
It was so nice to know your Idea. many thanks
My favorite country. It’s is really hard to choose, but let me say England.
England is the most attractive country for me. There are plenty of reasons why I like it. The first is because everyone speaks English, and in an environment of native English speakers it will take me no-time to learn English. [s]But one of the main[/b] Other things I like about England is are its culture, its architecture, the wheather weather and the people.
Every building is a story for in itself. I can watch those building and lost lose myself in time and space. Somehow buildings and architecture in England revive my deepest memories. The history of England is more than fascinating, expeciallyespecially the medieval ages. One of the most interesting storystories is about a robber named Robin Longstride (or Robin Hood) I don’t believe that ‘Longstride’ is anything other than modern film fiction. who’s has been expatriated by the King. No one for sureness can say for sure why Robin was expatriated, but history folklore says it is because the King can’t sustain ‘Endure’ might be better here. Robin’s glory after winning a battle with the French. The rest of the story everone knows. After Robin was expatriated by the King he started to steal from rich people and give stolen goods to poor people. Robin did this because the King was cruel, and had some weird laws of how tax should work: pay or die.
The next good thing about England is its weather.the Most of the time it is said to be rainy. I don’t know if that is just a habit conception, or a process proven by scientists, but when it is rainy my imagination doesn’t have an end. I can write about everything. I can imagine everything, think about everything, my innermost ideas rise to the surface.
The England is well-known by to have a minimum of natural disasters compared to other countries. I don’t complain about natural disasters in my country, but it’s just fact one more reason why I love England.
The literature is breathtaking. One Two of my favorite writers are Shakespeare and Oscar Wilde, and they are both from England. I should not forget to mention the movie 'The Lord of the Rings’, the best movie of that genre. For ages it was top of my movies list. It was first for ages on my top movies list. But the book is even better than the movie, and the writer is J.R.R Tolkien from England.
England also have has very good scientiest scientists, like: Issac Newton, Alexander Fleming, and Charles Darwin. Charles Darwin for surely changes changed the views of the world for sure, his discovery was,. His discoveries were, and still are, amazing.
The best musicians are from England. They created a new way in music, and put standars produced standards that no one can’t destroy. They are simple unreachable. The best selling album of all time belongs to the Beatles. they Their album is sold in so much has sold so many copies, and that which is just proof how about what great musicians they are. The rock group 'Queen’ are is also important to mention.
The more I write about England the more I falling into depression. I honestly hope that soon that day will come when my dreams come true.
Not bad at all, DA. You have some interesting ideas. Your writing is quite fluent and it has style.
Take a look at usage of the articles, particularly the definite article. Try to avoid the temptation to make your sentences over-long. You use commas where you should use full stops.
When you post an essay or similar piece of writing which you want corrected, then it is best to do so in one of the forums where essays are posted and in a new thread. Make sure the thread has a clear, relevant title. This will avoid it being lost among other posts.
Thanks Beeesneees , I will write another one. But with less grammar mistakes.