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Many people say that the only way to guarantee getting a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work.
How far do you agree or disagree with the above views?

There are a variety of reasons why many people are in favour of working after school. For instance, there are considerable number of shrewd businessmen and businesswomen who graduated merely from high school exist in the real business life.

The problem with going to university is that students waste time about four years or maybe more instead of gaining experience in real business life. Most of the high school graduated students are forced into go university in order to improve their skills on one specific subject. However, according to some polls the number of unemployed people who has a bachelor degree increasing gradually in recent decades.

As well as gaining experience earlier than the university students, to earn and to save money is another issue. If one begins to work after school, it might be easy to indicate the future plans. Moreover, the venture for the future would be more plausible owing to be in real business life and have more experince than the university graduates.

On the other hand, the university students think that the bachelor degree is not enough to be a high qualified person for employers to get a good job so in recent decades they prefer to continue their career with post graduate programs. For example, all the job advertisement indicates that a bachelor degree from a good university is required and a post graduate degrees will be an asset.

To sum up, although most people claims that the university graduated people can find a good job, in my view, sometimes it might be an asset is not accurate that university graduates find a good job.

TOEFL listening discussions: A conversation between a research professor and a student

There are a variety of VARIOUS reasons why many people are in favour of working after school. For instance, there are considerable number of shrewd businessmen and businesswomen who graduated merely from high school WHO NOW exist in the real business WORLD.

The problem with going to university is that students waste time FOR about four years or maybe more instead of gaining experience in real business life. Most of the high school graduated students are forced into go TO university in order to improve their skills In one specific subject. However, according to some polls the number of unemployed people who haVE a bachelor’S degree HAS increasED gradually in recent decades.

As well as gaining experience earlier than the university students, to earn and to save money is another issue. If one begins to work after school, it might be easy to indicate the future plans. Moreover, the venture for the future would be more plausible owing to be in real business life and have more experince than the university graduates.

On the other hand, the university students think that the bachelor degree is not enough to be a high qualified person for employers to get a good job so in recent decades they prefer to continue their career with post graduate programs. For example, all the job advertisement indicates that a bachelor degree from a good university is required and a post graduate degrees will be an asset.

To sum up, although most people claims that the university graduateSd people can find a good job, in my view, sometimes it might be an asset is not accurate that university graduates find a good job.

thanks alot for corrections. i will revise my mistakes and try not to make them again

Hello Seer,

I notice you’ve written ‘alot’ in a number of the ‘thank you’ posts you’ve made this afternoon. There is no such word as ‘alot’ in standard English. You need to write ‘a lot’.