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Many people believe that it is very important to make large amounts of money, while others are satisfied to earn a comfortable living. Analyze each viewpoint and take a stand. Give specific reasons for your position.
Many people live in this world. Every body has his own view. It does not matter what you want. Only your feelings matter.
In my opinion, money is the most important part of life. People cannot do anything without money. Every where, day by day inflation is increasing. Therefore, it is important to make more money. If we have money we have confidence do any thing in our life. Those people who earn higher salaries or making more money they feel good and have confidence. Money gives satisfaction as well. A person who earns more money, he will provide a comfortable living not only for him but for the family members also.
In our surrounding some people are very busy in their life. The reason for this is they want to make more money. They do not have time for their family and friends. This is not a good habit. Many people spend their time in making money they do not enjoy their life as other people do. After a long time they can be frustrate. Everything wants scarifies. If we want to make money we will have to leave the comforts of life. Many people do not spend their time to make money. They enjoy comforts of life and family. So they do not have more money as compare to others. Those people who are satisfied, they will not get more success in their life. These type of people cannot provide good education for their children. Not only for making more money but also to get other things people should have to come out from comforts of the surroundings.
Finally I would like to go with make money rather then a comfortable living. Living a comfortable life is a short period of happiness while making more money is a real fun of life. The reason is with money we can do everything in life. We can purchase a comfortable living by money. In contrast, money cannot be purchased by comfortable living. So people should always give their best for making more money. Opportunity come only ones. If we do not use it we will never get success. So I feel people should always try to make more money.
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