Hello,
Could you revise my two sentences, please?
An error has occured and as a result some of the changes made were lost. Go over the data and make any changes necessay.
Thanks!
You might want to use ‘review’ instead of ‘go over’ - and you need to review your typo at the end (necessary).
Thank you, Bev.
One more question: which one do you like best?
1.An error has occured and as a result some of the changes made were lost. Review the data and make any changes necessary.
2.An error has occured and as a result some of the changes made were lost. Review the data and make any necessary changes.
I’d be equally happy with either of those, Tort.
Gotcha,
Thanks a bunch!