Hello,
Could you revise my two sentences, please?
An error has occured and as a result some of the changes made were lost. Go over the data and make any changes necessay.
Thanks!
Hello,
Could you revise my two sentences, please?
An error has occured and as a result some of the changes made were lost. Go over the data and make any changes necessay.
Thanks!
You might want to use ‘review’ instead of ‘go over’ - and you need to review your typo at the end (necessary).
Thank you, Bev.
One more question: which one do you like best?
1.An error has occured and as a result some of the changes made were lost. Review the data and make any changes necessary.
2.An error has occured and as a result some of the changes made were lost. Review the data and make any necessary changes.
I’d be equally happy with either of those, Tort.
Gotcha,
Thanks a bunch!