make an important decision

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement ?
A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Answer:

I would say that whether a person should make an important decisions or not depends on their circumstances. When you take a great decisions, you need some advices, take experiences from your friends or relatives to help you to choose correctly, but you decide it by yourself. But a business decisions should be taken after consulting with your members on the team, because it is the work of groups, not personality.
It is very significant to have advices from your friends and your relatives when you make a big decisions. They can share to you many experiences from their lives, and help you to choose in right direction. For instance, when you do not be content with your work in your position for many reasons, you want to change to another position or environment, but you do not know much about that field. Your friend who work in that position will share to you many things about these. So you will plan how to solve the problem and you will make your decision by yourself and it must be suitable for your circumstance.
Besides, when you make an important business decision, I think that we should discuss together before you make a decision. Because it relates to all investing money of the holders, so sometimes you can not make a decision alone. Then, a great decision should be followed by many people who agree completely. For example, when you want to invest to the well-known place with large amounts of money, you will have a meeting to collect their ideas and analyze the events. After that you will follow the almost people who agree the plan of investment.
In conclusion, when you make an important decisions, you should take some advices to help you to choose correctly. Sometimes, you should follow almost people’s ideas because of benefit and respect of people.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement ?
A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Answer:

I would say that whether a person should make an important decisions or not depends on their circumstances. When you take a great decision, you need some advice AND TO take experiences from your friends or relatives to help you to choose correctly, but you decide it by yourself. But a Business decisions should be taken after consulting with your members on the team, because it is the work of groups, not personality.
It is very significant to have advice from your friends and your relatives when you make a big decision. They can share WITH you many experiences from their lives, and help you to choose in THE right direction. For instance, when you ARE NOT content with your work in your position for many reasons, you want to change to another position or environment, but you do not know much about that field. Your friendS who work in that position will share to you many things about these(,) AND So you will plan how to solve the problem(,) and you will make your decision by yourself and it must be suitable for your circumstanceS.
Besides, When you make an important business decision, I think that we should discuss together before you make a decision(,) because it relates to all THE investED money of the SHAREholders, so sometimes you cannot make a decision alone. Then, a great decision should be followed by many people who agree completely. For example, when you want to invest IN A well-known place with large amounts of money, you will have a meeting to collect their ideas and analyze the events. After that you will follow THE MAJORITY OF people who agree the plan of investment.

In conclusion, when you make an important decision, you should take some advice to help you to choose correctly. Sometimes, you should follow most people’s ideas because of benefit and respect of people.
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Not too bad Teresa. Please note, there is no such word as “advices”. It is “advice.”

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