Learning to use the word bills, adjusted payment and etc to construct sentences

English as a Second Language English Vocabulary, Grammar and Idioms
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-The amount of $1500 on the bill includes the total amount for this month’s bill and the adjusted payment difference over the past 6 months.

  • The $1500 on the bill includes the total amount for this month’s bill and the adjustment payment difference for the past 6 months.

-The amount of $1500 on the bill includes the total amount for this month’s bill and the difference in charges over the past 6 months after adjustment.

Did I phrase the above sentences correctly?

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Yes, they’re phrased correctly.

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While the grammar is fine, I don’t think your customers would understand exactly what you mean by the adjustment phrases unless this is defined someplace else.

You might consider something like this:
The amount of $1500 on the bill includes the total amount for this month’s bill plus an adjustment based on the difference between your payments and the billed amounts over the past 6 months.

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How about this version?

The amount of $1500 on the bill includes the total amount due for this month and the amount of arrears payable over the past 6 months.

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Absolutely true and I merely answered St8762’s question.
Your version and Lawrence’s make the message very clear.

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