Learning how to construct sentences related to car service/maintenance

English as a Second Language English Vocabulary, Grammar and Idioms
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  • I heard ominous sound coming from the car engine. In order to find out what happen to my car I checked the service maintenance system on car dashboard and it showed/displayed the car needs A6 service.

  • I heard ominous sound coming from the car engine. In order to find out what happen to my car I checked the service maintenance system on car dashboard and it has activated the A6 service code.

-In order to find out what happen to my car I checked the service maintenance system on car dashboard and found out that the A6 service code and been illuminated.

Can I phrase the above sentences in such ways? Please advise.

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I heard an ominous noise coming from the car engine. To find out what happened to my car, I checked the service maintenance system on the dashboard and it indicated that the A6 car needed service.

To find out what happened to my car, I checked the service maintenance system on the dashboard and found that the A6 service code was lit up.