Kindly rate this for IELTS band

Q12. You recently went to a restaurant but think you could have left your credit card behind.
Write to the restaurant. In your letter
* Tell them when you went there
* Describe where you think you may have left the credit card
* Explain what you would like the restaurant to do

Dear Manager,
Last week on May 1st evening around 5.20pm, I visited your Restaurant with my friends to celebrate my birthday. I made a reservation for 15, and we were placed near the window facing the ocean,
as per my special requested.
I remember paying the bill with my credit card. However, when I checked for the same after returning home, I realised that I may have left my credit card at your restaurant, after paying the bill.
I think it may have fallen down on the floor near the the 2nd window seat from the left as I dont remember seeing anything on the table while leaving.
Im extremely sorry for the inconvenience caused, but I was hoping if you can contact me at nanditha@ga.com or call me on 675765 if you find the credit card by any chance.

Thank you again for accommodating our requests, we had a great time.

With Thanks,
XXX

Hi Vinoth, this one is really good. Only a few minor errors that didn’t really affect my comprehension at all. I think this would be a solid band 7