can anyone tell me whats wrong with this sentence - “Kindly bear with us as we have few more points to clear from your esteem organization with regards to the same matter”
They are telling you to be patient. They will get around to answering your question soon.
The most obvious mistake is that ‘esteem’ should be ‘esteemed’ .
‘with regards to’ would be better written as ‘regarding’.
Therefore it would be, “Kindly bear with us as we have a few more points to clear from your esteemed organization regarding the same matter.”
To me, ‘kindly bear with us’ sounds Indian. I would substitute ‘kindly’ with ‘please’.[YSaerTTEW443543]
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