keep them up to date?

English as a Second Language English Vocabulary, Grammar and Idioms
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Hi, can you please amend this sentence:

You have customers whose success depends on the weather? Keep them up to date!

Many thanks,
Torsten[YSaerTTEW443543]

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Have customers whose success depends on the weather? Keep them up to date!

In this deliberately informal style of writing, sometimes “got” would actually be preferable to “have.” Beginning the question with “you,” however, feels odd and throws the reader off at first. You expect a declarative sentence.

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Thanks a lot for this, Mordant![YSaerTTEW443543]

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