Dear teacher and friends,
Could you help me correct the sentence below :
“Formulated in 2006 by creative motivated balls of fire, bringing new breeze to promoting system,
now we spread out our wings for promotion media, handling 3D animation, web marketing, web designing.”
Does it sound good for promotional and advertising purposes? I am looking forward to immediate reply.
“balls of fire” considered to be the actors/people behind and I wonder whether “breeze” is a better choice instead of “breakthrough”.