Is the bold part correct?

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It is important to deliver the message as “Would you like to practise this religion?” or ”You will be happy with this practice” and not engage in a debate. We should not make it sound like a confrontation too.

Is the bold part correct?

Thanks.

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Yes, I would say it’s correct.

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Yes, though I would make two changes to the rest of the text.

I would either make this “not to engage” since it logically follows “It is important”, or make it a separate sentence - "Do not engage in debate.”

I would also remove the “too” at the end of the text.

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