Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most
important aspect of a job is the money a person earns. Use specific
reasons and examples to support your answer.
although making money is one of the important aspect of a job but I am totally disagree that this is the most important one. There are more valuable things that a job can offer to people. In my opinion, Making friends, helping other people and enjoying more from life are more important than making money.
Communicating with other people in work environment is one of the most important things in a job. In the work place, you will meet new people who have a lot in common with you also they may have the same passion as you have and this a good start to make new friends.
Contributing something to the society make you feel that you are a helpful and useful person. There are a lot of people in the society that work in a charity without earning money. This work give them such a good feeling that nothing can replace it.
The other important aspect of a job is enjoying from your time and your life. If you love your job, you will know that nothing is more enjoyable than solving a problem or designing some thing new. As an architect, my best time of the day is when I am designing and in fact I see it as one of my favorite hobbies.
All in all, I believe there are more important aspects in a job than just making money. Making new friends, Helping the other people and enjoying more from your life are some of the reasons that made people to work even thought they may not earn money.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most
important aspect of a job is the money a person earns. Use specific
reasons and examples to support your answer.
(A)lthough making money is one of the important aspectS of a job but I am I totally disagree that this is the most important one. There are more valuable things that a job can offer to people. In my opinion, (m)aking friends, helping other people and enjoying more from life are more important than making money.
Communicating with other people in THE work environment is one of the most important things in a job. In the work place, you will meet new people who have a lot in common with you(.) also They may ALSO have the same passion as you have(,) and this a good start to make new friends.
Contributing something to ONES society makeS you feel that you are a helpful and useful person. There are a lot of people in the society that work in a PERFORM MANY charitABLE ACTS without earning money. This work give them such a good feeling that nothing can replace it.
The other important aspect of a job is enjoying from your time and your life. If you love your job, you will know that nothing is more enjoyable than solving a problem or designing some thing new. As an architect, my best time of the day is when I am designing(,) and in fact I see it as one of my favorite hobbies.
All in all, I believe THAT there are more important aspects in a job than just making money. Making new friends, (h)elping the other people and enjoying more from your life are some of the reasons that MAKE people to work even THOUGH they may not earn A LOT OF money.
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A very nice essay Elle.
hi everyone, I’m new member here. And I don’t know how to post my essays in this forum. Can you show me the way to do this? I’m sorry about my trouble but now I really wanna be corrected my essays. Thanks lot
Choose an appropriate forum, depending on the context of your message. (as you are planning to submit an essay, select one of the essay writing forums). Click on that forum’s name to open it.
Click on the “newtopic” button. (There is one near the top and one near the bottom of each page.)
Think of a suitable meaningful subject for your message (Don’t just call it ‘review my essay’… I suggest ‘Essay: then a part of the title’). Complete the ‘subject’ box and paste your essay into the ‘message’ box, then click on the “Send message” button.
By following these instructions your post is far less likely to be overlooked. Please, as I said in point 4, try to make the subject of the message meaningful!
Hi Slova,
You’ve joined in our Forum since 08 Aug 2010, but you don’t know how to post your work?
One more thing to remember: Don’t post more than one essay in a while. After receiving a checked essay, you should revise it clearly in order to recognize your mistakes and avoid committing it again! In Vietnamese: Rút kinh nghiệm cho những lần về sau!
“hi everyone, I’m new member here. And I don’t know how to post my essays in this forum. Can you show me the way to do this? I’m sorry about my trouble but now I really wanna be corrected my essays. Thanks lot”
Your first post has some basic errors: I’m A new member here, AND I don’t know how to post my essays in this forum. Can you show me to do this? I’m sorry about my trouble(,) but now I really WANT TO be corrected my essays. Thanks A lot! (Pay attention to the CAPITAL WORDS!!!)
CA.
Beeesneees, thanks for your clearly direction. I will do following to your show.
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To coolapple: Thanks you so much. You seemly know all my fault. My English is so bad. Hope that you will help me more and more.
And the question: Joining on Aug 8th but I do not know how to post essays. Because I only come here to see other essays, I didnot think that I will post any essays here. But now I change my mind. B-).
I know my English is bad, but I’m sure that you can understand me. :D. Anw, I will try try try to improve my English.
I guess you are a boy, is it right?
Learning from others by looking at their sample essays is a good way to improve your writing skill, but I bet you will gradually forget all about them if you don’t make them yourself. what’s the way in here? Try to read more published papers written in English, of course, and try to copy the way they write them. In this way, I believe you will excel at English writing!
CA.
Certainly after reading essays, I try to write by myself. And can you show me where I can read foreign newpapers or information. I really want to read them. But when I try to find in Internet, it is so boring. I do not want to read information about soceity or economy. They make me feel sleepy.
Hope that you will help me more and more.