Topic: If you could change one important thing about your country, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
Essay:
There is no doubt that I really love my country, because I was born and grew up in here with a lot of beautiful memories from childhood. Although my country is very wonderful, it still has some social and economic issues that we should change in order to help people to have better lives. From my point of view, the most significant thing that I would like to change in my homeland is traffic systems because of safety and economy development.
First of all, the improving of traffic systems brings safety for people in my country. Nowadays, a long with the development of economy, the numbers of people and transports are rising very quickly. Nevertheless, all old roads are inadequate for the demand of people who need to use traffic systems. The roads are small and obsolete, but cars and other transports are too crowded; as a result, amount of dangerous accidents are also rising rapidly. The lager and better roads will reduce a numbers of accidents, because it decreases the numbers of cars on the way at the same time and make drivers to prevent some issues such as obstacle on the ways or to slip when it rain.
Secondly, new traffic systems will benefit our society and contribute to the development of economy. When we improve roads, people will move faster and easier. Therefore, they may save a lot of times for moving and use these time for other works. In addition, farmers need to use roads to carry their goods to markets, so to built new highways helps transportation goods from source of supply to the markets to become more convenient and effective. Consequently, the economy will grow up faster and attract more foreign investment thanks to new traffic systems.
To sum up, the traffic system is the main factor of economy and society in my country. For these reasons that I mention above, improving traffic systems is my best choice when I can change one thing in my country, because it will bring safety and prosperity for my country.
TOEFL listening lectures: A lecture from a marine biology class
Topic: If you could change one important thing about your country, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
Essay:
There is no doubt that I really love my country, because I was born and grew up in here with a lot of beautiful memories from childhood. Although my country is very wonderful, it still has some social and economic issues that we should change in order to help people to have better lives. From my point of view, the most significant thing that I would like to change in my homeland is THE traffic systems because of safety and economIC development.
First of all, the improving of THE traffic systems brings safety for people in my country. Nowadays, (along) with the development of THE economy, the numbers of people and transports are rising very quickly. Nevertheless, all old roads are inadequate for the demandS of people who need to use THESE traffic systems. The roads are small and obsolete, but cars and other transports are too crowded; as a result, THE NUMBER amount of dangerous accidents IS also rising rapidly. The l LaRger and better roads will reduce THE numbers of accidents, because it decreases the numbers of cars on the ROAD at the same time and HELPS drivers to prevent some issues such as obstacleS on the ROADways or SKIDDING when it rainS.
Secondly, new traffic systems will benefit our society and contribute to the development of OUR economy. When we improve roads, people will move faster and easier. Therefore, they may save a lot of time for moving and use THIS time for other works. In addition, farmers need to use roads to carry their goods to markets, so to builD new highways helps IN THE transportation OF goods from source of supply to the markets to become more convenient and effective. Consequently, the economy will grow up faster and attract more foreign investment thanks to THESE new traffic systems.
To sum up, the traffic system is the main factor of economy and society in my country. For these reasons that I mention above, improving traffic systems is my best choice when I can change one thing in my country, because it will bring safety and prosperity. for my country.
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Not bad TL. You are getting there.
Kitos. 8/10
Dear TL and Kitos, I didn’t mean to interrupt but I’m really interested in the topic of traffic enhancement you chose for this essay and I would like to make a contribution to your main idea of economic development: I think the improving of the traffic system would also allow the economic advance to reach remoted areas and enable trading to prosper there, which will raise the financial condition of many people living in poverty since they can all benefit from the development of the economy, make full use of their potentials and create a sustainable economy.
That is just my addition to your essay, I think it is quite worth consideration! Tell me what you think about it. Thank you!
Thanks Trangtran for your idea, it is very interesting idea. I had thought before I wrote, but I didn’t have enough time to write it. Therefore, I decided to pick 2 ideas that I wrote in my essay. if I meet the similar topic, I will consider to use your idea in my essay. Thanks again!!!
You are welcome 
I’m really glad I can help
Good topic question to discuss! I’m also very interested in the transportation problems, especially in my country-Vietnam.
As far as I am concerned, the transport system in Vietnam is underdeveloped, especially in the rural areas and the mountainous ones. Improving transport system such as building more road connecting villages to villages, provinces to provinces is a good idea that can result in a better outcome in terms of economical development as well as cultural exchange. As you know, the more convenient a transport system is, the more attractive the reaching destinations are. A lot of urban areas are being built thanks to some crucial policies of the Vietnamese government, and that will trigger many advantages such as improving the living standard, poverty alleviation; many unemployed people can have a job to support their family living budget, not mention the development in real estate, industrialization, to name a few.
Hope this helps!
Hiep (Coolapple, Hanoi, Vietnam)
I’m really glad I can help