If any of the non-believers feel they wish to embrace ABC religion after sharing my experience, I will/would be more than happy

English as a Second Language English Vocabulary, Grammar and Idioms
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If any of the non-believers feel they wish to embrace ABC religion after sharing my experience, I will/would be more than happy.

  1. Is the sentence correct?
  2. Should it be “will” or “would”?

Thanks.

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If any of the non-believers desire to embrace the ABC religion after I share my experiences, I will be more than happy.

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It sounds like you are addressing an audience directly after telling them of your experiences.
I think that calling people non-believers and asking if they want to embrace the religion after just an introduction would alienate most people. I would suggest “If, after hearing of my experiences you would like to learn more about ABC, I’d be happy to talk with you.”
Alternatively “…after hearing what I’ve shared…”

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