IELTS writing task 2- Please give me feedback and estimated Band Score please

[Torsten]

Hi Mehmet, we are going to give you some feedback on your latest submission in a while. In the meantime, you might want to become friends with @tizid:

Is it more important to be an individual or to be part of a group?

Hi, I’m practicing for my exam and I would like to know how my writings are going. There are rules for everything in this world but what if them are keeping us from more great things. However i am not saying we should just do whatever we want, because that, would be a disaster. lots of things were discovered because of people considered different, that were not part of the group. Clearly, being individual from time to time has not been a bad thing. Without a doubt, woman are the biggest exampl…