**Hi everybody. I wrote an essay about health topic. I wonder your feedback and estimated band score. @Sumejja @tim_m **
It is generally thought that preventative measures are better than treatment and governments should give a large share to health education system and prevention for illnesses. I totally agree with that because measurements play a vital role in the matter of people’s health.
First of all, it should be known that healthcare system of country is connected to the county’s health budget. If government give a small share to the health system, we can easily say that people should be worry about their health. So, health education system and preventative measures should be given a large proportion from health budget. This is important because doctors, who take care of us, are an assurance for our health. Hence, they should be educated in the best universities. In addition, they should gain experience as working from early years. As a result, doctors can detect our illnesses or tell that what we should do if we do not want to be ill. For example, when we go to the hospital because of heartache, the doctor examines us. Then, if the doctor have a good education, he can say to us that we carry risk of hearth attack and should give up smoking. This is a good example why governments should give a large portion to the health education system.
When it comes to prevention, I think the vaccine is the crucial thing for measurement. The vaccine gives to people immunity. People, who are injected, are protected from illnesses thanks to the vaccine. Nowadays, Covid-19 cause a lot of people’s death all over the world. Although, scientists are working on develop the vaccine for this virus which is considered to be a solution, it hasn’t developed by scientists yet. If they had developed a vaccine for coronavirus, a lot of people would not have died. As you can see, preventative measures are extremely important for people’s life. Therefore, people, who lead the country, should spent lots of money on health education and preventative measures such as vaccines in order to provide a good life standard for their citizens.
In conclusion, I totally agree with that health education and preventative measures are necessary for a country and this can be provided thanks to doctors’ good education, developing a vaccine for various illnesses as well as spending lots of money on these topics by government.