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Writing Task 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Some people believe that teaching music in schools is a vital part of growing up and the human experience, whilst others believe that teaching music in schools is a waste of time and resources.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Each subject always has its unique value, and music as well so it currently are chosen by many schools to not only help students get into this good value but also bring the progression and one own experience. However, some believe that this is a waste of time and resources. This essay will discuss both these sides and with additional personal opinion
It is good for students to experience music in school due to two main reasons. For the first reason, student’s musical talent will appear early as soon as they have learned music in school, especially primary and secondary school. In fact, the extraordinary talent of some of the world’s famous composers was performed when they were young such as Mozart, Beethoven, etc. Another important reason, Music is humankind’s great achievement so young people will discover significant lessons and has magnificent experiences for their life. For example, while students research classical music, they can find out strange things about music like melody, tempo, rhythm, etc.
However, music becoming a core subject in school also has some negative points. One of the main reasons is students who are always stuck in their deck with huge tasks have to spend time to study a no important subject. In fact, there are few parent’s requirements that schools should eliminate music so students have free time for relaxing in the rest time and more focusing on other academic subjects. Thus, over many subjects in school make students dizzy, even depressing. In a 2018 study, psychologists show that over 3 million students were hospitalized at this time because of forcing learning talent-based subjects.
In conclusion, no one can deny two sides of a coin, and a mentioned problem as well. Personally, It is necessary to teach music in school because of all of the above positive factors.