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The questions still remains: How relevant will IELTS bands and TOEFL scores be in a couple of years:

Is writing becoming obsolete? The Effect of AI on Writing and Standardized Testing

Is how you write as important as what you write? Beginning in grade school, we are tasked with learning grammar rules. By the time we reach college, we are expected to have some general knowledge of academic writing. However, we now live in a world with artificial intelligence. AI has a great effect on the importance of our ability to engage in academic writing. Artificial intelligence now has the capability to do this writing for us. For instance, robot reporters can now produce journal ar…