Ielts writing task 1 informal letter

Hi everyone,
Can you help me complete my letter?
Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

A friend of yours recently gave you a nice birthday present.

Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,

– thank her for the present and say why you particularly like it
– describe some other presents that you received
– explain some of the things you did on your birthday.

You should write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

Dear Sarah,
Dear Sarah,
How is it going?
I am writing to you to thank you for the special present that I received in my birthday. That’s awesome! You know, I really love it. Why did you know I particularly like watching the movie series and blockbusters on Netflix such as Game of Thrones, Big brother, Avengers, Thor, ect. Before my birthday, I had prepared to save money to sign up for an official account on Netflix . I can’s believe that you can remember it.
There were some other gifts that I gave on my birthday like the interesting books, the photo album of cute animals and fun items, especially with an additional coupon. I honestly love all of them.
We had had dinner together at the Shushi restaurant in HCM city as soon as we finished my birthday party at home. Then, we discussed the later added party with karaoke singing but some of my friends came home.
Looking forward to seeing your response!
Hope to speak to you soon,
Nhanh

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How about you give it a try first?

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