IELTS Writing task 1 Bar chart - 14-03-2019


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Please help me check this IELTS writing task 1- Bar Chart.

The graph illustrates the figure for the total quantity of energy recycling provided in Australia, Germany, Norway and Iceland in 2000, 2004 and 2007. While this percentage of Norway and Germany have a tendancy of constant rise in 2000, 2004 and 2007, the number of figure in Iceland and Australia slightly increased at the same period. Besides that, the total supply of Norway’s renewable energy witnessed the most highest point , Australia was seen as the most lowest by contrast. The proportion of suppliance transforming from energy resources was about 8 % in Australia and 52% in Iceland through 2000. Then, these 2 nations’s provision minimally increased to 10% and by 58% in 2004 before seeing a both decline of 9% and 55% in 2007. At the same time, the quantity of consumption of Germany and Norway saw a upward trend increasing by 18% from 11% in Germany and by 79% from 61 % in Norway throughout 3 years. That of continual rise also bring about the top of renewable energy of the total supply to Norway.