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Q: The movement of people from agricultural areas to cities to work can cause serious problems in both places. What are the serious problems? What measures can be used to solve these problems.
Instead of living in agricultural areas, people favor moving to cities and working there. This is a vitally important issue in many societies today. In this essay, I will firstly discuss the causes of this problem and then offer some possible solution to it.
First of all, it is clear that more and more people move away from farms to cities affect quality of life in city. Crowded living areas caused environmental and social problems. Such as air, water and noise pollution are increased and the criminal events are difficult to avoid. Besides, it will cause huge influence for societies that if there are less farmer to produce grains, fruits, fish etc. It may cause a huge financial burden for import agricultural products for a country or individuals.
In consideration of how to solve this, the first is to deal with it from welfare perspective. This measure could construct basic infrastructure such as libraries, swimming pool, school and hospitals, which are usually lacked in agricultural areas. The other solution is that the government could introduce new laws to encourage individuals to live in farms or work there, but with the incentive for more awards such as reduce tax.
In conclusion, I believe that this is clearly a problem of such complexity that no solution is likely in the short time. However, I believe that the measures outlined above would provide a good first step.