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Q: People can live and work anywhere they want to choose because of improved communication technology and transport. Do the advantages of this development outweigh disadvantages?
Over the past few decades, new communication technology such as skype and advanced transportation have had a huge impact on working and living location. Despite the number of disadvantages associated with these influence such as losing connection with family, I strongly suggest that the advantages are more influential, as I will first explain.
First of all, because of the communication software is developing rapidly, People from different countries can work together. In one instance, my company used skype to communicate and solve problems with our partners in America which is in the different time zone. This is very convenient and time-saving. Secondly, anyone can choose living outside the crowded cities thanks for the rapid development of transportation. One particular good example of this is, in Taiwan, People who live outside the city using high speed railway to commute to their working space. They can enjoy several benefits such as lower living-cost and bigger living space.
On the other hand, there are few drawbacks of when people living and working anywhere. Some people favor living in other countries because they can learn other culture, but they may lose their connection with family. One of my friends choosing to study abroad in New York, she experienced many feelings, which included home-sick and frustration. Which means that choosing where to live or work is a complicate situation.
Although there still are some downsides with wherever people want to stay, I still conceive that the advantages of novel communication and transportation outweigh disadvantages.