The two graphs give information about the main reasons for study of students at the different age groups and the percentage of support they received from employers.
Overall, across the age groups, studying for career decreased, however, for interest witnessed an opposite tendency. Meanwhile, there appeared an erratic trend in the support employers gave students by age group.
As can be clearly seen from the first chart, “for career” accounted for 80% of the main reasons for study at group of people aged under 26, then this figure gradually declined through the older age groups to 20% - the lowest rate at group of people aged over 49. In contrast, the percentage of studying for interest increased from 10% to 70% respectively. Specially, the proportion of studying for career, and for interest almost reached the same level - about 40% at 40-49 age group.
Look at the second graph, the highest percentage of support students received from employers was over 70% at the youngest age group (under 26), this figure decreased dramatically to 30% for people aged 30-39, then rose slightly to over 40% at the oldest age group (over 49).
Hi Hoangle, I think your explanation for the second graph was a little misleading, or at least unclear. The rest of your report did a pretty good job summarizing the data,but you had some word choices that made your writing sound somewhat unnatural. Overall I think I would rate this a band 6.
