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There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the traditional music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Today, every kind of music is listened to all over the world. Because people need to listening to music for relaxing and explaining their thoughts. Also, I believe that traditional music is more important than other nations music, international music as well.
First of all, people need to listening to music. There are many reasons about that. Firstly, most humans work very hard nowadays and many times they feel tired and hopeless. At that times, music helps them. People are relaxed when they listened to song which is about love. Majority of people, do not think that world which does not involved any songs. Music is considered red to be a saver for them. Also, an important artist said that "Music is good for soul." thousands year ago. Secondly, music is a beautiful way in order to explain our thoughts. Some people, who are shy, use the music for introducing themselves and telling their thoughts and feelings. For instance, people who have speaking difficulty, sing a song for telling their thinking about something.
Regarding to the importance of traditional music, in my opinion that is the more necessary than international music. However, we hear international music almost every place. I think, culture is one of the important things in the world. Nations have to protect their culture from everything, other nations’ music as well. Because music is the easiest way to carry culture from one country to another. If people’s own culture disappear, they would lost bond with their older. Consequently, they would not know who they are. So, they would be confused and unhappy. Humans should listen to their traditional music rather than international music in order to not losing their identity.
In conclusion, music is the most significant requirement for people. Because people can explain their thoughts and feelings by music. In addition, they feel comfortable when they listened to music. As I said before, although international music is most popular in the world, people should listen to their own traditional music. Because, that is key for protecting their own culture and identity.